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How I Would Die

El amor es uno de los elementos emblemáticos de la vida… "When you are smiling the whole world smiles with you"
Fue lo que me salvó la vida, ya lo sabes.  Me pregunto por qué algo tan simple puede repeler de ese modo a la gente.
Breve o extendido, espontáneo o minuciosamente construido, es de cualquier manera un apogeo en las relaciones humanas.
Decir que somos novios sonaría demasiado frívolo e inadecuado si se tiene en cuenta nuestro pasado, nuestro presente y nuestro futuro, porque es evidente que la historia que hemos compartido nos convierte en mucho más que eso.
Con todo, puedo proclamar en voz alta que somos algunas gemelas y compañeros eternos.
Y para ser sincero, prefiero no calificar la relación que nos une.
Como mucho aprendes a vivir con el enorme vacío que deja su ausencia.
He sido un bicho raro durante demasiado tiempo; me duele verme tan solo.
Sé lo que sientes en estos momentos, y tú sí lo mereces.
Cuando te veo, no distingo nada. Por el tono y el ritmo, me parece dinámico, vertiginoso, enérgico, ágil, incluso un poco agitado. Nadie que tenga la tensión baja sería como tú.
Me parece que tus ideas espontáneas fluyen libremente. Y se destaca usted. Y se destaca usted por la seguridad con que eres, por su hábil y muy sutil manejo de las palabras.
Para poder tener sentimiento del humor es necesario reconocer como mínimo una chispa de gracia en uno mismo. Y, a decir verdad, de momento no reconozco ninguna, no tengo absolutamente nada de gracia.
Si paso revista a los últimos días y las últimas semanas, se me quita la risa.
Pero ésa es mi historia personal y no viene a cuento.
En todo caso, gracias por tu estilo refrescante.
Si por casualidad vuelve a perderse por en mí, me alegraré.

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How I Would Die

Love is one of the features in life … "When you are smiling the whole world smiles with you"
It was what saved my life, you know. I wonder why something so simple can thus repel people.
Brief or extended, spontaneous or carefully constructed, is in any way an apogee in human relations.
To say that we are engaged sound too frivolous and inappropriate if you consider our past, our present and our future, it is evident that we have shared history makes us much more than that.
However, I can loudly proclaim that we are some twins and eternal companions.
And to be honest, I prefer not to describe the relationship between us.
As much learn to live with the huge void left by its absence.
I've been a freak for too long, it hurts just to see me.
I know how you feel right now, and you deserve it.
When I see you, can not tell anything. From the tone and rhythm, it seems dynamic, fast-paced, energetic, agile, even a little hectic. No one with the lower voltage would like you.
I think your spontaneous ideas flow freely. And you stand out. And you stands for safety that are, by their very skillful and subtle handling of words.
To have a sense of humor is necessary to recognize at least a spark of grace in oneself. And, actually, I do not recognize any moment, I have absolutely no grace.
If I review recent days and weeks, I removed the laugh.
But that's my personal story, and beside the point.
Anyway, thanks for your refreshing style.
If you happen to get lost again in me, I will rejoice.
:iconvamkar:
"How I Would Die"

Here is the English translation. I hope to recreate as accurately as possible. As I said before in my others poems, it is very difficult to try to communicate in another language the same emotions and feelings that have been written in different language, so I hope I have done a good job. Believe me: it sounds, read, and has much more meaning and emotion in Spanish.
In the English version, if someone finds something wrong in the grammar or spelling, or a word that can replace to make it better, please let me know. I would really appreciate it.
Hope you enjoy...
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:iconjiuyhnogyt:
simplemente hermoso !!
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:icontuskado:
~Tuskado Jan 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'm not one to know much on this topic or do I write well myself. But man you are probably the best writer I have seen! (I only saw the top at first and started freaking out XD)
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:iconvamkar:
haha, thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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:icontuskado:
~Tuskado Jan 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
XD you could probably teach my language teacher!
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:iconvamkar:
Hahaha, ok!
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Mood: Love ~Sonjakl Jan 27, 2013  Professional Photographer
But what good does it do
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:icondeex89:
Mood: Love ~DeeX89 Jan 27, 2013  Professional Photographer
forgetting those painful miseries
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:iconashantieh:
Mood: Affection ~Ashantieh Jan 27, 2013  Student Writer
A simple word of 'sorry'
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:iconriaok:
Mood: Love ~Riaok Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
(mine last longer)
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Mood: Affection ~Catherinewe Jan 26, 2013  Student Writer
And picking at the lace
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